Those Transitions Are Key

I forget who pointed me at this excellent short video recently. Whoever it was, thank you.

When building stories, don’t forget this excellent advice from Matt Stone and Trey Parker: Avoid “and then” in favor of “therefore” and “but.”

Update

Fitness: Rest day
Sun, Moon, and Stars: 259 words, 404 seven-day average, 276 average, 45778 total, 2222 to go for the week; 6-day streak